Ooh, now there's a pretty picture.

Thanks so much. I'm such a detail-oriented person that it's actually a struggle, if I'm not writing something super-quickly, to not get bogged down in the minutiae and to keep the narrative going. By the same token, I like putting in details when I write and picking them out when I read, so it's great to hear that they worked for you here. Thanks for singling out some of your favorite parts!