Oh, man, I really felt for Jennifer -- her terror at being attacked by the Sheppard thing, and the thought that maybe it didn't just look like Sheppard, it was Sheppard in a way, and meanwhile everyone's like, "Stay calm, Jennifer! It's fine!" That was scary, because we know John's more than a little fucked up and that could easily have been in him.

I like that you gave us so many different POVs on the action, Jennifer's view of Sheppard, and Sheppard feeling hunted by her insistence on being friends, and Ronon and Teyla and Rodney, too.