http://theeverdream.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] theeverdream.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_santa 2009-12-23 10:21 am (UTC)

Um.... UM! Wow... really awesome plot twist with the senator. John's "sex twice in her life" and "the perfect ass" lines are just priceless, and I just adore the bits about the elderly Atlantis (and the ending paragraph with her was fantastic).

Really great story!
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