Great medical mystery plot, great h/c, sweet established relationship, nice Team and Atlantis interactions. I really liked the idea of Calendar Day! It was neat to see Ronon give Rodney the inspiration that got him un-stuck, Rodney figuring out the problem, and then Lorne actually being the individual sent out to another universe. Lorne being the ambassador was actually *reasonable* and a nice change from shoehorning the Team into doing everything (even if they want to). I also thought your reasoning that the other universe would comply and shut off the machine very compelling: "this is John Sheppard. He would never allow this to happen". Of course not! Kudos on a compelling story!