ext_16786 ([identity profile] d_odyssey.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_santa 2010-01-07 01:16 am (UTC)

I love the use of the opposite and equal effect of the device, especially as those in the other universe have no idea that they are inflicting pain on other John Sheppards. Well thought out and written story. Liked how the suggestion of the voodoo doll sparked the idea in Rodney. Great character voices. Enjoyed this from start to finish. Nicely done. As stated above, excellent story possibility telling the story from the other side. Nicely done!

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