This was absolutely spectacular! I really loved your Tok'ra OCs. They were often 'sort of bad guy's' in canon so it was really neat to see them as something more then wacky aliens there to cause trouble for SG1.

And Rodney made a great Tok'ra. he always gets things done, but he works best when he has someone with him to keep him focussed and calm. Guess he has that all the time now.