Excellent adventure.

I'm not too coherent, as I can barely keep my eyes open, but I enjoyed this very much.

I liked Rodney as a Tok'ra. I agree that he's someone who could adapt to the situation. Although, I bet his early days of 'blending' were probably interesting, to say the least.

John's dreams were a good way of getting him used to what was happening without him having to relinquish any control.

And, I'm glad you explored some ideas about Tok'ra relationships and society. There have to be a lot of possible stories there.