I just found this little piece of perfection and wanted to let you know how much I love it. It's so so adorable! You totally got the characterizations nailed down. John was so incredibly cute and caring in his courtship. The muffin! The banter! Yay! And Rodney's snappishness and obliviousness and his (late) epiphany. Ooohh, and the kisses! Thank you so much! I have a huge smile plastered on my face right now (and I guess I still will in a few hours). :)