leesa_perrie: two cheetahs facing camera and cuddling (Team 1)
leesa_perrie ([personal profile] leesa_perrie) wrote in [community profile] sga_santa 2009-12-22 07:21 pm (UTC)

Excellent!! I loved the way you described Rodney all hyped up and on overdrive! And the team feeling came through strong and clear, especially at the end there! I particularly LOL'ed at the Ronon section that ended:

Ronon stared at him.

Rodney stared back.

Ronon stared at him.

Rodney star-

"Not helping!"
LOL!!

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