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kisahawklin ([personal profile] kisahawklin) wrote in [community profile] sga_santa 2009-12-17 07:11 am (UTC)

Oh, thank you so much, santa! I'm sorry I'm so late to the party - I can't comment to LJ from work... and now I've been working on deadline-tight material, so the comment window's been sitting open all night. I'm sorry to be such an untimely recipient! :(

Despite (eep) not knowing the source material, I really loved this story! The atmosphere you set up in the first section is really lovely, and I really like John's observations about flying. I love it when people describe John and his love of flying.

I also really adore John's misunderstanding of Rodney's forthright discussion of John's attraction on the end; it's so like him to not get that Rodney's just talking about it the way Rodney does, and that of course Rodney loves him too!

Thank you so much, santa! I really loved my story, and I'm sorry I took so long to tell you how much.

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