ext_16786 ([identity profile] d_odyssey.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_santa 2010-01-03 08:50 pm (UTC)

Great job of blending and blurring the lines of John's reality, giving us a look into his backstory. Liked the portable interface and the Ancient's admitting they make mistakes. Good voices for everyone. Excellent flashbacks to Afghanistan and the depth of frienship with Mitch and Dex. Well done!

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