ext_24344 ([identity profile] kristen999.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_santa 2010-01-02 11:36 pm (UTC)

Very nice John POV, espeically the blurring image and memories of his past. You even included the drglord from "Home"! Nice detail of the slow bled from the broken rib, that was wonderfully done.
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