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a_blackpanther ([personal profile] a_blackpanther) wrote in [community profile] sga_santa 2009-12-17 10:24 pm (UTC)

OOh, very good. I really like this fic, and all of the team's interactions. And John trying his best to help his team survive. I also liked the insight into John's past.

having a DR in front of my name
This is minor, but i think changing DR to Dr. might help people get the joke on the first read. I read it as D R, went 'huh?' and then realized he meant Dr.

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