"If I really wanted to be your mate then surely by now you would be flat on your back with me straddling you, would you not?"

That line really made me laugh, as well as Rodney continual failure at meditation. Poor Rodney, managing to get in the way of all the attacks against Teyla! Clearly the guy should have targeted Rodney, then he might have actually managed to kill Teyla ;)

I really liked the friendship between the two of them throughout this piece, it was very realistic, and I also liked that you didn't end with everything magically fixed, but still with the expectation of a happy ending :)