Definitely liked it! You had a wonderful Teyla POV, and their (hopefully growing) attraction was certainly palpable. I'll enjoy imagining the two of them getting their happily ever after.

I loved the obvious team affection as well, with Ronon asking to see Rodney first and John glued to his side in the infirmary. Despite the melancholy of the UST and Rodney's despair at his pain and vulnerability, this was a sweet, warm story and very enjoyable. I certainly hope your recipient enjoyed it as much as I did. :D