ext_1554 ([identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_santa 2009-10-14 01:28 am (UTC)

Re: Well, I suppose it wouldn't hurt...

Brilliant. Just brilliant.

I mean both you and John. That maneuver with the hyperdrive was fantastic, especially John's inner monologue. Should've been thinking in four dimensions. The man is smart.

Tag, you're it, Mendez. Ha!

So few do action well in fandom, and [livejournal.com profile] whizzy, you're one of the best.

Beta comment: the punctuation on "Not you, Mendez" threw me. I thought he was addressing Mendez. Took me a minute to realize you meant "Not you -- Mendez."

How I love the fact that Mitchell was chewing them out as they trained, and the fact that Sheppard isn't experienced in air-to-air combat. It comes off as so believable, and I have even more respect for Sheppard knowing that he isn't combat experienced. Way more respect.



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