ext_16786 ([identity profile] d_odyssey.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_santa 2008-12-26 06:17 pm (UTC)

Fascinating story, full of layers and twists and turns. Liked how you handled the mystery of the cube. Loved John's dreams and how he got to connect to his brother and father and get some closure and peace. Nice how the cube affected everyone differently or not at all in Rodney's case. Enjoyed the scene had the end with the music festival, the candles and John and Rodney affirming that it wasn't just the cube that brought them together. Nice Christmas touch and happy ending.

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