This was great fun. I always love seeing female-centric fic in this fandom. All the character voices were great, and you really developed a lot of personality for Banks, Vega, Reynolds, and Vendross in a fairly small space.

I also enjoyed this culture/planet you created, and the exploration of how various cultures value different things & have different needs, and how that's true not just as a distinction between Pegasus and Milky Way but between Pegasus cultures as well. Very cool.