Fic: It's Growing Day by Day (McKay/Sheppard, Teyla/Kanaan, Ronon/Various, NC-17)

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Title: It's Growing Day by Day
Author: telesilla
Recipient: auburnnothenna
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard, mention of: Teyla/Kanaan, Ronon/various
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~27,500
Summary: During a routine mission to check out an off-world Ancient lab, team Shep is cut off from Atlantis when the stargate is buried beneath a ton of rubble. There's another way off the planet, but getting there will not be easy.

Notes: First of all, I want to thank my awesome beta, who went over this in record time. Without her help, this story would have been so very messy. Auburn asked for many things, but the one that stood out and made me write this story was: " either Sheppard and McKay, or the whole team, or even a larger Atlantis contingent, is marooned on another planet Swiss Family Robinson-style." This isn't quite that, but it's close. :)

It's Growing Day by Day

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Comments

[temaris.livejournal.com]

I really enjoyed this -- I especially liked the attention to small things -- how long it can take to travel unknown terrain while hunting, testing the food, and how much they all stank ::g::. The big things -- the relationships, and how they ended up talking instead of telling each other stories, -- were really good too. Definitely a keeper, this one :-) Thank you.

[telesilla.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I really wanted to show even more of the small things, but I just ran out of time, so I'm glad what I managed to get in there worked. :)