Swan Swan ([identity profile] swanswan.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_santa 2008-12-20 11:55 pm (UTC)

EXCELLENT use of action. By the second part my feet were tapping with nerves and I was totally sucked into it. I like how you let the backstory leach in, and the way you showed the different Ronon and Teyla reactions. Good stuff!
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