ext_2781 ([identity profile] incidental-fire.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_santa 2008-12-19 12:20 am (UTC)

Wow. Very nicely done. The sentences were so simple and stark, it really felt like we were in John's head as he was experiencing this and trying to come to grips with it all. Powerfully done.
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