Oh well done! I like the pilot AU, loved the few references to the SGC and how our people got out of it. I liked John's attitude to flying commercial - it helped it make more sense, to see that he spent the first year hating it but now loves it.

I really liked the build-up with Rodney, and understand the need for conflict with the I-have-a-girlfriend-thing. Still a really shitty thing to do, but I get where it came from and what happened.

And the end was super cute.


So! Awesome fic. Totally fun.