Oh, wow, this is lovely! I love the way you've written Zelenka here, and Lorne; the AU feels entirely plausible to me, and I love the details of it. Rodney and Zelenka's working relationship sounds fabulous and spot-on, and I love the way Evan tells Lorne that from about the second time they worked together, the couch wouldn't have been necessary. Delicious and sweet and makes me hungry; AWESOME! What a fabulous first story to read in this year's sga_santa!