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shalom ([personal profile] shalom) wrote in [community profile] sga_santa 2008-01-05 02:33 am (UTC)

This is wrenching and so well written. His slow slide of loss (for himself as well as Rodney) is tearing, piece by piece.

I don't know if you've ever read it, but this unstoppable sense of loss reminds me of Daniel Keyes' Flowers for Algernon.

Well done!

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